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May 10th, 2014, 10:20 pm

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decorativescarf,

May 10th, 2014, 10:20 pm

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I've had a bit of fun drawing this page lol poor Rei.

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Crestchan,

May 11th, 2014, 6:46 pm

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@decorativescarf: Yes I feel bad for Rei too. I do love the 5th panel. It looks both cute and funny.

Kippi,

May 11th, 2014, 10:08 pm

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Mia... Lia... Twin senses... are tingling!

Love how Lia's holding Hikari like she's too precious for this world in the 5th panel lmao

Mystearen,

May 31st, 2014, 9:21 am

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New to the comic so i just binged-read up to the most recent.

At times your anatomy is really weird, and kind of inconsistent. Most notably are the hands. Sometimes they're right, other times they're way to small. (panel four is the best example of the hands being to small.) They're the same size in panels 1 and 4, but the perspective makes them seem much to small in panel 4. panels 2 and 3 have the best hand proportions. You generally do a great job with the rest of the body though. Really like your shading. =D

Issues with hands aside, overall I like the comic. but i feel a little left out in terms of context. So i'm really hoping for more to fill that in <3 (but obvious twins are obvious. or their parents are REALLY uncreative. xD)

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